Name: Hrishi
Homework is not a waste of time
Homework is not a waste of time, it's actually a hero! Yes it is boring and not amusing but without homework we cannot have an amazing future to build on. Are you sure homework is a waste of time? With homework we get to expand are learning abilities. Homework makes us get marks for what we learned. It helps us to do better in subjects. Another reason homework is great is because it gets you ready for big tests. Sometimes students also forget what they learned last year, but homework makes you have a light review on what you did last year.
Ever wonder how Sydney Crosby is great at hockey; it is because he practices very hard. Like that homework is practice on what we learned each day. This practice helps us reach our goals like getting good
grades on your report card. A world without homework is world without practice.
Homework is a helping hand for us to get that great future job. It's not fun but it's all worth it at the end. Homework helps us build our great future. The homework given today is the future of tomorrow.
Hey Hrishi,your essay is good and I also like your concluding sentence. Two things that you should on is your introduction when you mention your reasons of why homework isn't a waste of time and your body paragraphs. But overall,its a good essay!
ReplyDeleteyou have proven that homework is not a wast of time but i didn't realy get the full affect of it their was some grammer mistakes it got my atenstion but not my full attenstion it was a good but i liked when you told me that homework gives lots of knoledge thats true and you showed alot of detail in sentence it was sewprub essay
ReplyDeleteDear Hrishi,
ReplyDeleteyou explained your point of view clearly and excellent and restated superbly in the conclusion.I am sure homework is a waste of time and you call the homework we got light these past days.I think you could have written a bit more.Also "A world without homework is world without practice" is not completely true. like common look at Einstein before he died.Although i enjoyed reading your essay.
Dear Hrishi,
ReplyDeleteYou thesis was explained clearly and the intro grabbed my attention. It was also really funny! I like how you added a real person in there also. Ithink you should add more emotive language to make it better and have a longer and more attention grabbing conclusion! I really liked reading your essay!
Kris