Homework is a waste of time!
After a long day at school, most students would just want to relax and watch TV or even go to an activity or program. We can't do that if there's a bunch of homework waiting to be finished. Homework is a waste of time! Students should have more time to have fun after school!
After school, students might have a soccer game or piano lessons. They can't enjoy it with the fact that they have homework to finish as soon as they get home. Therefore, the programs, or activities, can end really late, moreover when they get home, they might be too tired to finish the homework. Furthermore, the homework could take a long time. As a result, the students will end up going to bed late. Consequently, that can effect they're grade since they would be too tired.
Everyone knows that homework has to do with what you learned in class. Why do we have to go over the same things again? What if we already understand the lesson? Those are definitely questions that teachers should think about before giving us homework. Above all, students can be losing sleep because they're doing homework on things they have already done before! This must come to end!
Lastly, students might have younger siblings to look after while one of their parents for the family and the other is working late. It would be really tiring to babysit and do homework at the same time, especially if there's a lot of it!
Billy Joel once said "If you are not doing something you love, you are wasting your time!" We have to give up things that are important to us just for homework. This is damaging our freedom!
By: Megan.D
Dear Megan,
ReplyDeleteYou didn't mention your three suporting details in your conclusion and,your conclusion is too short. You used a lot of logical connectives which a liked and, you clarly stated the topic of the essay. Keep up the good work.
Hi Megan!
ReplyDeleteWhat I liked about your paragraph is that, in the introduction, you clearly stated your argument and you also used emotive language.Somethings you can work on are not putting logical connectives so close together! Other than that, your essay was well put together!
Hi Megan,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used a lot of emotive language but maybe alittle to much in the first body paragraph. try to use less imotive language in one paragraph and more in the other. but other than that great essay and keep up the great work.
Dear Megan,
ReplyDeleteYour essay is amazing! I agree with almost all your points. I liked that you used a lot of emotive language but you should try putting more into the essay not just in one paragraph also try to make it a litter longer. Over your entire essay is really amazing!
From: Victoria