Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Homework is not a waste of time!!
Name: Lucas
Teacher: Ms. Babb
Date: Tuesday, February 23, 2012

            Do you think we should get homework or not? Well as a result more kids in Cardinal Leger understand more of what they learn in class by getting homework. Homework is good to have because it is like practise for the next day. Also homework shows your teacher that you're capable of finishing it in the time given.
            Homework is not a waste of time because you would understand what you learned at school or at least make it more clear for yourself.  Also homework is not a waste of time because if you didn't understand much at school, you would get more help by practising by doing your homework. If you don't really understand your homework you should skip the question and move on so you could finish the other questions. Doing more of the same work usually gets your mind back but if it still doesn't you bring it the next day to school and ask your teacher for help.
            Homework is not a waste of time because if you're kind of unsure about something you're getting taut at school. When you get homework your mind gets back into what you were learning and you start understanding more. However more people would have more of an understanding of what their teacher is trying to teach.
            Homework is not a waste of time because it would show if you're responsible to work by yourself and to make sure you that you finish. It would prove to your teacher that you're capable of finishing you're by the next day or by the time given. Also it shows that you use your time wisely and that you don't talk a lot and focus.
Now if you understand why homework is not a waste of time you should always do it and complete it because it will help you learn better and easier. Quote by Ms. Babb "if you don't finish your work it becomes a zero. Homework isn't just because your teacher has nothing better to do, it's so they know that you understand what to do.

2 comments:

  1. Dear Lucas,
    Your essay was breathtaking. You clearly stated why you thought homework isn’t a waste of time in each of the paragraphs you wrote. I like the way you repeated each paragraph with 'homework is not a waste of time' it shows the reader that you strongly believe and stand by your opinions. You kind of stated in your introduction paragraph what you were going to write is good. Something you might wanna try working on is just a little more emotive language and also just a few grammar mistakes I saw. Other than that, your essay was fantastic.

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  2. Dear Lucas,

    Your essay is awesome! I like how you used your opinion and make it seem as a fact. I also liked your points they are really good. However you seem to be repeating homework is not a waste of time in every paragraph. You should try to change it up a little. Also I saw some mistakes you should proofread your essay before handing it in. Over all you did an awesome job!

    From: Victoria

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