Homework is a waste of time
Thursday. February 23, 2012
By: Justin S
I think is waste time because everybody goes to school to learn and when you come home we are suppose to relax and spend time with are family because the next day are parents have to work and we don't get to see are parents so why do have to come home and do more work that was just taken up in class.
When we go to school we learn lots of neat things and get more experience but when we come home we should be sleeping or getting rest up for the next school day. At home we have to do chores making dinner helping our grandparents but we have no time to do that because we have homework.
Another reason is that we have to work hours and hours on are homework it may be hard then we have ask are parents for help and the parents may come home and had a bad day at work and they build up more stress by trying to help you with your homework or sometimes the parents might just do the work for you and you will not learn anything.
Dear Justin S,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your reasons, like in paragraph one where you stated "we are suppose to relax and spend time with are family". I also like your supporting information. An example is when you said in paragraph one "because the next day are parents have to work and we don't get to see are parents". But, you have many grammar mistakes like in paragraph three where you said "we have to work hours and hours on are homework". And i noticed that you only have three paragraphs when you were supposed to have six and it says that in our rubric. Overall your paragraph was okay.
Dear Justin.S,
ReplyDeleteYour paragraphs are detailed and explained clearly. I also like how you thought with great ideas!. I think you should look over your work because there are many mistakes. You also don't have a conclusion and a introduction. It was good other wise.
Kris
Dear Justin,
ReplyDeleteThe essay was great.You tell the truth that we need to spend time with our family instead of homework.One thing you can do is have less mistakes.But other than that the essay was great.
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